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the mapa below show the change that took place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 2000 and 2013.

The map indicates the advancement which took place at Templeton seaside resort from 2000 th 2013. Overall, a comparison of the two maps reveals a change from a rural to urban landscape. In 2000, the town was a much greener residential area with a large number of trees and individual houses, but during the next 13 years the town experienced a number of significant changes. The most noticeable is that all of the trees west of the River were cut down, with some houses replaced by blocks of flats, a village and a supermarket. Only a few trees west of the river remained. On the other side, few trees east of the River were replaced by an airport and few individual houses. Furthermore, few houses were demolished and trees were cut down, and a factory was built sprang up from the sea. Lastly, a railway was constructed along with west to east of the river and there is a ferry on the sea.
The map indicates the advancement which took place at Templeton seaside resort from 2000
th
2013.
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a
change
from a rural to urban landscape. In 2000, the town was a much greener residential area with
a large number of
trees
and individual
houses
,
but
during the
next
13 years the town experienced a number of significant
changes
. The most noticeable is that
all of the
trees
west of the
River
were
cut
down, with
some
houses
replaced by blocks of flats, a village and a supermarket.
Only
a few
trees
west of the
river
remained. On the other side, few
trees
east of the
River
were replaced
by an airport and few individual
houses
.
Furthermore
, few
houses
were demolished
and
trees
were
cut
down, and a factory
was built
sprang up from the sea.
Lastly
, a railway
was constructed
along with west to east of the
river
and there is a ferry on the sea.
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IELTS academic the mapa below show the change that took place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 2000 and 2013.

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  American English
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