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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period

The line graph gives information about foreign and local university students in Australia in a 10-year period. It is clear that there are more overseas students than local ones from 2001 to 2010. Also, the number of foreign students is still increasing with a dramatic slope, while the number of local students is almost stable. Looking at more details we can see that the number of students who are not from Australia started at 2000, while there were fewer Australian students around 13000 in that year. Moreover, the number of students in both categories increased in the following years and the gap became larger. In 2006, students who were from Australia accounted for almost 2000 which must 2. 5 times less than non-local students. In addition, near 80000 students chose Australian universities in 2009: however, almost one-quarter of this figure belonged to local students. In the following year, the figure for local students standstill, while foreign students experience considerable growth.
The line graph gives information about foreign and
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in Australia in a
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than
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ones from 2001 to 2010.
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of foreign
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is almost stable.

Looking at more
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who are not from Australia
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started
at 2000, while there were fewer Australian
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around 13000 in that
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.
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of
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in both categories increased in the following years and the gap became larger. In 2006,
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who were from Australia accounted for almost 2000 which
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2. 5 times less than non-local
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.
In addition
, near 80000
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chose Australian universities in 2009:
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, almost one-quarter of this figure belonged to
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local
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. In the following
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, the figure for
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standstill, while foreign
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experience considerable growth.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period

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