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This chart represents the percentage of British people that have given money to charity, classified by age, throughout the years of 1990 and 2010.

This chart represents the percentage of British people that have given money to charity, classified by age, throughout the years of 1990 and 2010. k65An

This chart represents the percentage of British people that have given money to charity, classified by age, throughout the years of 1990 and 2010. The bar graph reached its highest peak in 1990 with the age range of 36-50, representing an approximate of 42%, on the other hand the lowest point was in 2010 with the age range of 18-25, representing an approximate of 6%; nevertheless people were always willing to help charity. We can observe how the year of 1990 has the biggest percentage of British people that have given money to charity, however in 2010 the last 2 age ranges turned the graph acquiring a higher percentage. Within the age range of 65 onwards, the citizens that helped charity were in the closest percentage as there only was a difference of 3%. To summarize, there were upward and downward trends that are not that noticeable and we can conclude that British people from 18 to 25 gave less money to charity while the age range of 35-50 were the main donors to charity.

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percentage
 of British You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
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given
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charity
, classified by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
, throughout the years of 1990 and 2010.

The bar graph reached its highest peak in 1990 with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
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range
 of 36-50, representing The phrase 'an approximate of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'an' and 'of'.
an approximate of
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 the lowest point was in 2010 with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
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range
 of 18-25, representing The phrase 'an approximate of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'an' and 'of'.
an approximate of
 6%; nevertheless
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people
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help
 charity.

We can observe how the year of 1990 has the biggest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 of British You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 that have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 money to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundphilanthropyendowmentdonation
charity
, however
 in 2010 the last 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
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ranges
 turned the graph acquiring a higher You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
. Within the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
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range
 of 65 onwards, the citizens that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
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charity
 were in the closest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 as there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 was a difference of 3%.

To summarize
, there were upward and downward trends that are not that Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).noticeable, and
noticeable and
 we can conclude that British You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 from 18 to 25 gave less money to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundphilanthropyendowmentdonation
charity
 while the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
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range
 of 35-50 were the main donors to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundphilanthropyendowmentdonation
charity
. 