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This Bar graph illustrates the percentage of women and men who passed when they appears for their driving test from 1980 to 2010, in one of the Asian country.

This Bar graph illustrates the percentage of women and men who passed when they appears for their driving test from 1980 to 2010, in one of the Asian country. yPYnP
This Bar graph illustrates the percentage of women and men who passed when they appears for their driving test from 1980 to 2010, in one of the Asian country. Overall, the highest women individual percentage who clear their test in 2000, in contrast at the same time men's passing percentage was much lower than women's. From the graph, the passing percentage of women is much higher than of men's. Women get clear their test in 2000, the percetage was approx 69. Whereas men's highest passing percentage for the same period was around 49. Apart from this, the lowest individual get clear their test was in 1980 in both the cases, whether it is women or men. Women were nearly 48% who passed their exam, moreover, men were 28%. However, in the decade of 2010, the 2nd highest percentage of men and women who clear the test can be obsereved easily. The percentage of women passed the test were just near to 64% and for men it was around 49%.
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for the same period was around 49.

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