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The diagram shows the the life cycle of flowering plants

The diagram shows the the life cycle of flowering plants 6NgM8
The given diagram illustrates the the life cycle of plants regarding on it's growth. as an overview, it can be seen that the process includes six steps and it begins with absorption of water by seed and ends with the seed dispersal. Firstly, water is taken up and absorbed by the seed of plants which causes their germination. Germination is the second step of the life cycle in which growth of roots and warmth are the essential factors for the growth. The third step is the growth of stem and stem grows in the direction of sunlight. This is followed by by pollination which is the process of transportation of pollen between two plants with the help of insects. pen-ultimately, fertilization takes place which leads to the formation of fruit and seeds. The final step is dispersion of these seeds away from the plant and then entire process continuous.
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dispersal.
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which causes their germination. Germination is the second
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of the life cycle in which
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of roots and warmth are the essential factors for the
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. The third
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of stem and stem grows in the direction of sunlight. This
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plants
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, fertilization takes place which leads to the formation of fruit and
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and then entire process continuous.
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