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This bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who is a teacher in six different education systems in the UK in 2010.

This bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who is a teacher in six different education systems in the UK in 2010. KlL96
This bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who is a teacher in six different education systems in the UK in 2010. As the chart show, the women have a higher percentage than the men in the nursery, pre-school, primary and secondary school. In contrast, men have a higher percent in private training institutes and universities. The percentage of females working for nursery and pre-school accounts for nearly 100% while there just over 0% male work at here. In a university, men have accounted for nearly 70% which is considerably higher than a woman, just under 30%. In college, the number of female teachers is the same as a men. They all account for near 50%.
This bar chart
shows
the percentage of
men
and women who is a teacher in six
different
education systems in the UK in 2010.

As the chart
show
, the women have a higher percentage than the
men
in the nursery,
pre-school
, primary and secondary school.
In contrast
,
men
have a higher percent in private training institutes and universities.

The percentage of females working for nursery and
pre-school
accounts for
nearly
100% while there
just
over 0% male work at here. In a university,
men
have accounted for
nearly
70% which is
considerably
higher than a woman,
just
under 30%.

In college, the number of female teachers is the same as a
men
. They all account for near 50%.
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IELTS academic This bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who is a teacher in six different education systems in the UK in 2010.

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