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The pie chart explains the proportion of students watching sport competitions while the table compares students attendence in such events based on gender.

The pie chart explains the proportion of students watching sport competitions while the table compares students attendence in such events based on gender. q0mOd
The proportion of learner's watching sport competitions and the students attendence in sporting events are involved in divided by male or female is depicted in given pie chart and tabular chart. The first glance on the pie chart is adequate enough to show that most of college students are not going to sporting events which is four fifths. While rest of the college students like going to watching sporting events. Turning on the information of tabular chart, mostly male participation in supporting event's as compare to the female. The maximum number of male participate in football, which is 34. Moving further, the college student attendence in basketball from both genders is similar about 10. Besides this, out of nine who play volleyball, 5 are females and 3 are males. The tennis is observed as the favourite sporting event for females which is 24. The proportion of badminton female player's is 3. By contrast, the proportion of males is doubled then female's. Overall, it is clear that maximum number of students not going to watching sporting events, whereas per the tabular chart, alot of male students interested in football as compare to the female's.
The proportion of learner's watching sport competitions and the
students
attendence
in sporting
events
are involved
in divided by male or
female
is depicted
in
given
pie
chart
and tabular
chart
. The
first
glance on the pie
chart
is adequate
enough
to
show
that
most of college
students
are not going to sporting
events
which is four fifths.
While
rest of the college
students
like going to watching sporting
events
. Turning on the information of tabular
chart
,
mostly
male participation in supporting
event
's as compare to the
female
. The maximum number of male participate in football, which is 34. Moving
further
, the college
student
attendence
in basketball from both genders is similar about 10.
Besides
this, out of nine who play volleyball, 5 are
females
and 3 are
males
. The tennis
is observed
as the
favourite
sporting
event
for
females
which is 24. The proportion of badminton
female
player's is 3. By contrast, the proportion of
males
is doubled
then female's.
Overall
, it is
clear
that maximum number of
students
not going to watching sporting
events
, whereas per the tabular
chart
,
alot
of male
students
interested in football as compare to the female's.
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IELTS academic The pie chart explains the proportion of students watching sport competitions while the table compares students attendence in such events based on gender.

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