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The diagram shows the steps involved in the process of production of leather goods.

The diagram shows the steps involved in the process of production of leather goods. Bwypa

The assigned process illustrates various steps which involved in the production of leather goods such as handbags and so on. Overall, the production of leather goods is man-made and complex process, which consist of approximately eleven steps; beginning with drying the animal skin and ending with producing leather goods. Moreover, all the steps are mandatory and the omission of any single step would halt the whole process. In the initial step, the animal skin is drying on the rope after then it is transported by truck to factory. In the following step, a large tub is used to wash the animal skin with the water and lime then it is soaked into lime after this it is smoothened and flattened by the help of rolling machine. Moving to the remaining details, the flattened skin is soaked in tannin which is the mixture of water and vegetable matter afterwards the skin is polished by roller. In the penultimate step, with the help of lorry flattened skin is transferred to the factory. In the final stage, the leather goods has been produced namely shoes, handbags, and sports equipments.

The assigned process illustrates various You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
 which involved in the production of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withskin
leather
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withequipmentpropertyfurnishingsfurniture
goods
 such as handbags and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on.

Overall
, the production of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withskin
leather
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withequipmentpropertyfurnishingsfurniture
goods
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
-made and complex process, which consist of approximately eleven You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
; beginning with drying the animal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skin
 and ending with producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withskin
leather
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withequipmentpropertyfurnishingsfurniture
goods
. Moreover
, all the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
 are mandatory and the omission of any single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 would halt the whole process.

In the initial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
, the animal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skin
 is drying on the rope after then it is transported
 by truck to factory. In the following You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
, a large tub is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to wash the animal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skin
 with the water and lime then it is soaked
 into lime after this it is smoothened
 and flattened by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of rolling machine.

Moving to the remaining This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, the flattened You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skin
is soaked
 in tannin which is the mixture of water and vegetable matter afterwards the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skin
is polished
 by roller. In the penultimate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
, with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of lorry flattened You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skin
is transferred
 to the factory. In the final stage, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withskin
leather
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withequipmentpropertyfurnishingsfurniture
goods
 has been produced
namely
 shoes, handbags, and sports equipments. 