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The maps below show the centre of a small town called JBK as it was in 2004 and now, in 2020.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called JBK as it was in 2004 and now, in 2020. EwboM
The given graphs give information about the improvement in the centre of a tiny township named JBK as in 2014 and in the current time in 2020. It is clear that the principal change to the town will be the construction of a mall, accommodation and shifting of school and hospital from one place to another in 2020. Looking at the map of JBK as in 2004, we can see that there is no change in the park, whereas, the school is shifted from west to north-west, and hospital from north to the west now in the current time. However, now in 2020 there is a small mall were constructed between the accommodation and offices area, and also the accommodation was increased in size as compared to the past, while also another accommodation were built up at the opposite side of the park at the north side in JBK town in 2020.
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graphs give information about the improvement in the
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centre
of a tiny township named
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JBK
as in 2014 and in the
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current
time in 2020.

It is
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clear
that the principal
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change
to the town will be the construction of a mall,
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accommodation
and shifting of school and hospital from one place to another in 2020.

Looking at the map of
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JBK
as in 2004, we can
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see
that there is no
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change
in the park, whereas, the school
is shifted
from west to north-west, and hospital from north to the west
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now
in the
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current
time.

However
,
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now
in 2020 there is a
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small
mall
were constructed
between the
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accommodation
and offices area, and
also
the
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accommodation
was increased
in size as compared to the past, while
also
another
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accommodation
were built
up at the opposite side of the park at the north side in
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JBK
town in 2020.
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IELTS academic The maps below show the centre of a small town called JBK as it was in 2004 and now, in 2020.

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6.0
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