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These images compare the amount of water consume with various reasons in six parts of word, In this essay I try to summarise the data and compare them with each other.

These images compare the amount of water consume with various reasons in six parts of word, In this essay I try to RRo2p
These images compare the amount of water consume with various reasons in six parts of word, In this essay I try to summarise the data and compare them with each other. In south America, Africa, central Asia and south east Asia most of these resources was wasted on the agricultural reasons, otherwise north Amaricans and European consume water for Industrial reasons and in all charts less that a fifth of water was used for demestic needs. Africa, central Asia and south east Asia by using more than 80% and south America with 71% of their water resources on Agriculture waste numerous amount of it. In contrast these areas of the world only used water for industrial and domestic reasons less than 20% for each.
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consume with various
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in six parts of word, In this essay I try to
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the data and compare them with each other.

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, Africa,
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central Asia
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for Industrial
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and in all charts less that a fifth of
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was
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demestic
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central Asia
and
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south east
Asia by using more than 80% and
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south America
with 71% of their
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resources on Agriculture waste numerous amount of it. In
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contrast
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IELTS academic These images compare the amount of water consume with various reasons in six parts of word, In this essay I try to

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3 paragraphs
124 words
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