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Some experts believe it is good for students to start learning other languages at primary school rather than secondary schools. What extent do you agree or disagree?

Some experts believe it is good for students to start learning other languages at primary school rather than secondary schools. What extent nXl1e
Teenagers are not capable for learning foreign language at primary school. some experts believe that it is best for candidate to start learning dual language at Junior School rather than High School. This essay will talk about for student future and student are knowledgeable from other language. To begin with, if a student will going to other country for study therefor foreign language is most important. children are learning a foreign language at primary school, then they can take admission in high level English Medium School in other country. In high school, student do not feel foreign language is difficult because they learning foreign language at primary school for student foreign language is needed in a Junior school. Increase communication skill and knowledgeable from learning a foreign language in younger age. In younger age, children are feeling learn other language is more difficult language and they can ignore this language. Student start learning a foreign language at primary school, so student are in the depression mode because it is not able to learning foreign language at Junior School. To conclude, in young age children are not handle laborious language at primary school because some students do not skillful for learning a foreign language at primary school. They can capable for memorize a foreign language at high school.
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. Increase communication
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in younger age.

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IELTS academic Some experts believe it is good for students to start learning other languages at primary school rather than secondary schools. What extent

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