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Distribution of families with at least one child under 16, by employment status, 1976

Distribution of families with at least one child under 16, by employment status, 1976 Mrj3k
The given charts provide information About employment status of Canedy and families with children in the year 1976 and the year 2014. Overall, dual couple or nurse and single earners accounted for the maximum portion of the pie chart while, single working mother, no earner And male lone parents occupied the least proportion. Female lone payments showed a significant figure in both the periods. To begin with, couples with working male partner showed a one third drop in employment status in the year 2014 compared to 1976 as it was 17% and 51% respectively. Similarly, with single mothers the value grew twice as it was 8% in 1976 and 16% in 2014. Conversely, the percentage of dual earning couples increased up to 20% in 2014. On the other hand, male lone parents showed a rise by four times and female earning couple showed an increment by 3%. Couples with no member working showed a decrement of 2% in the year 2014 compare to 1976.
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1976 and the
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2014.
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, dual
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or nurse and single earners accounted for the maximum portion of the pie chart while, single working mother, no earner And male lone parents occupied the least proportion. Female lone payments
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a significant figure in both the periods. To
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with working male partner
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a one third drop in employment status in the
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2014 compared to 1976 as it was 17% and 51%
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, with single mothers the value grew twice as it was 8% in 1976 and 16% in 2014.
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increased up to 20% in 2014.
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, male lone parents
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a rise by four times and female earning
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couple
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an increment by 3%.
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with no member working
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a decrement of 2% in the
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2014 compare to 1976.
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