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Eating sweet foods producess acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth dacay.Describe the information below and discuss the implications

Eating sweet foods producess acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth dacay. Describe the information below and discuss the implications DwWYp

The given line graph explain the acid level in the mouth from consumption of sugar/honey. And this graph illustrates the cause of tooth decay. In the graph, both axis shows increasing ph levels and time elapsed after eating sugar/ honey. The provided diagram mainly mentions about Fruit sugar, cane sugar and honey. Moreover the graph shows a positive Trent. According to this graph when eating fruit sugar the acidity level in mouth increase after 5 minutes. Here the ph level is 4. 5 and it takes 20 minutes to get normal. It shows an increasing Trent. The cane sugar, when we eat the acidity level in mouth increases heavily after 5 minutes. Here the level of PH is 3. 5. Moreover it takes more than 30 minutes to get back to a stable level (ph 5. 5). The occurrence of a decay is very high. The consumption of honey it makes a small of acidity in mouth. It consists of very low PH level (5) at 5 minutes. But after 10 minutes the acidity level is stable in the mouth. Here the chance of getting tooth decay chance is very low

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