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These charts give information about the amount of money spent on different forms of advertising in 2005 and estimated change in expenditure in 2006.

These charts give information about the amount of money spent on different forms of advertising in 2005 and estimated change in expenditure in 2006. Such means of advertising as TV, direct mail, newspaper, radio, magazines and Internet were analyzed. The largest proportion of total spending was seen in advertising on TV. The next largest amount of total spending is related to direct mail and newspapers. The second chart shows that the lowest projected rise is connected to magazines. By far the highest expected growth of spending money is connected to the Internet, more than twice in comparison with other categories. Moreover, relatively slower growth in newspaper advertising was predicted in comparison with magazines. Expenses connected to the radio were forecasted to decrease in 2006.
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different
forms of

advertising in 2005 and estimated
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change
in expenditure in 2006. Such means of advertising as TV,

direct mail, newspaper, radio, magazines and Internet
were analyzed
. The largest proportion of total

spending was
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seen
in advertising on TV. The
next
largest amount of total spending
is related
to direct

mail and newspapers. The second chart
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shows
that the lowest projected rise
is connected
to magazines.

By far the highest
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expected
growth of spending money
is connected
to the Internet, more than twice in

comparison with other categories.
Moreover
,
relatively
slower growth in newspaper advertising
was predicted
in comparison
with magazines. Expenses connected to the radio
were forecasted
to decrease

in 2006.

IELTS academic These charts give information about the amount of money spent on different forms of advertising in 2005 and estimated change in expenditure in 2006.

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