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The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart presents the contribution of five identified industries in the economy of Brazil between 2009 and 2019 with an estimate for 2029. Overall, finance outranks the four industries showing a steady increase within a two-decade period whereas manufacturing has the lowest number of shares which is predicted to consistently decline until 2029. The finance sector began with an impressive 30% in 2009 with a 5% increase every 10 years. Oil, coal, and gas came in second as its first recorded year was at 25% and reached a peak of more than 30% before it is predicted to have a fall back to its ballpark figure in 2009. Similar to oil, coal, and gas, food processing also has a mild erratic period as it grew 10% from 2009 to 2019, but it is expected to plunge down to the same figure. The third contributor is the tourism industry, which has the same starting point as the energy sector, but it took a slight dip of 5% after a decade and is likely to remain steady until another decade.
The bar chart presents the contribution of five identified industries in the economy of Brazil between 2009 and 2019 with an estimate for 2029.
Overall
, finance outranks the four industries showing a steady increase within a two-decade period whereas manufacturing has the lowest number of shares which
is predicted
to
consistently
decline until 2029.

The finance sector began with an impressive 30% in 2009 with a 5% increase every 10 years. Oil, coal, and gas came in second as its
first
recorded year was at 25% and reached a peak of more than 30%
before
it
is predicted
to have a fall back to its ballpark figure in 2009. Similar to oil, coal, and gas, food processing
also
has a mild erratic period as it grew 10% from 2009 to 2019,
but
it is
expected
to plunge down to the same figure.

The third contributor is the tourism industry, which has the same starting point as the energy sector,
but
it took a slight dip of 5% after a decade and is likely to remain steady until another decade.

IELTS academic The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

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