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Can you name any famous people who have (or had) a reputation for saying unexpected things? Who? What kinds of things do (or did) they say, and why?

The table shows information about the five best small companies in Britain which came top in a survey of staff conducted by a national newspaper to find out which companies are the best to work for. The number of staff members is approximately the same in the first four companies, even though this number is a great deal higher in the fifth company. According to male and female staff ratio, the fifth company has the best proportion, followed by the second one. In case of the first and the fourth companies the female staff is more numerous, and in the third company has more male workers. As for the age of workers, there is a little number of people over 55s and people under 35s are in more demand. The staff turnover shows a low percentage in all companies, except the fifth one. The staff in high income bracket gives information that in the first company more than a third of staff has high salary, the second has almost a half and in the third company this number is much higher. On the other hand, two other companies have a very low percentage of high salaries.
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in Britain which came top in a survey

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conducted by a national newspaper to find out which
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are the best to work for. The

number of
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members is approximately the same in the
first
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,
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number is a great deal higher in the fifth
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company
. According to male and female
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ratio, the fifth

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has the best proportion, followed by the second one. In case of the
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and the fourth

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the female
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is more numerous, and in the third
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has more male workers. As for

the age of workers, there is a
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number of
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over 55s and
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under 35s are in more

demand. The
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turnover
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a low percentage in all
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companies
, except the fifth one. The
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high income bracket gives information that in the
first
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more than a third of
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staff
has high

salary, the second has almost a half and in the third
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this number is much higher. On the other

hand, two other
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have a
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low percentage of high salaries.

IELTS academic Can you name any famous people who have (or had) a reputation for saying unexpected things? Who? What kinds of things do (or did) they say, and why?

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