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The given line graph illustrates percentage of purchasing music by different methods, like streaming, downloads and CDs purchased from 2011 to 2018. Overall, CDs purchased and downloads have a download trend and become not so popular as streaming. Percentage of streaming music is gradually increasing during the given period. CDs purchased and downloads have nearly 55% and 35% respectively in 2011. As an overall trend, they decrease till the end of the period. The result is that CD purchased is 25% and downloads is 30% in 2018. It can be seen, that downloads reach a peak in 2014, illustrates the culmination in all kinds of selling, over the next years, it goes down. The reverse is the case with streams. Starting from 5% in 2011 moves upward to 42% in 2018 and touches the highest point at the end of the given period.
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line graph illustrates percentage of purchasing music by
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different
methods, like streaming,
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downloads
and CDs
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purchased
from 2011 to 2018.

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, CDs
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purchased
and
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downloads
have a
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download
trend and become not
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so
popular as streaming. Percentage of streaming music is
gradually
increasing during the
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given
period.

CDs
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purchased
and
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downloads
have
nearly
55% and 35%
respectively
in 2011. As an
overall
trend, they decrease till the
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end
of the period. The result is that CD
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purchased
is 25% and
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downloads
is 30% in 2018.

It can be
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seen
, that
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downloads
reach a peak in 2014, illustrates the culmination in all kinds of selling, over the
next
years, it goes down. The reverse is the case with streams. Starting from 5% in 2011
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moves
upward to 42% in 2018 and touches the highest point at the
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end
of the
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period.

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