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The wter cycle process. Summurise the information and write a report

The wter cycle process. Summurise the information and write a report MyW1L
The chart illustratees the flow of water in nature. Water evaporation and cloud formation are the first two stages in this process. As a final step to show water spreads after falling to the ground. 80% of water vapour in the air comes from the at the evaporation step by sun heats the air. After dehydration clouds are formed by condensed water vapour. Water falls as rain or snow i the second phase. It called as precipitation. Rain water may take a variety of paths at the third stage of the cycle. As a result of surface run off, some of it may end up in lakes or dlows back to the ocean. Some volume of rain getting absorbed by plants in impervious layer. Also salt water intrusion take place just before water passes directly to the oceans to complete the water cycle.
The chart
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illustratees
the flow of
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in nature.
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Water
evaporation and cloud formation are the
first
two stages in this process. As a final step to
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show
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water
spreads after falling to the ground.

80% of
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water
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vapour
in the air
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comes
from the at the evaporation step by sun heats the air.
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After
dehydration clouds
are formed
by condensed
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vapour
.
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Water
falls as rain or snow i the second phase. It called as precipitation.

Rain
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water
may take a variety of paths at the third stage of the cycle.
As a result
of surface run off,
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some
of it may
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end
up in lakes or
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dlows
back to the ocean.
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Some
volume of rain getting absorbed by plants in impervious layer.
Also
salt
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water
intrusion take place
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just
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before
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water
passes
directly
to the oceans to complete the
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cycle.
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IELTS academic The wter cycle process. Summurise the information and write a report

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