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In 2011, there was an average of nearly 60% sales on CDs purchased, in comparison with only around 5% on Streams. Over the next five years, the percentage of total music sales by CDs purchased increased dramatically while the percentage of total music sales by Streams witnessed a considerable increase. In 2006, the majority of music sales were the same on Streams and CDs, with just about 30% on each. From the year 2016 onwards, it can be seen that Streams peaked at about 40% of purchases while CDs bottomed out at about 25%. In 2011, although people had started to download music, it only represented 35% of sales. In 2014, Downloads peaked in 2014 at about 43% of sales but fell to 30% by 2018.
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nearly
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sales
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purchased
,
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only
around 5% on
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Streams
. Over the
next
five years, the percentage of total
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music
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sales
by
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CDs
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purchased
increased
dramatically
while the percentage of total
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music
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sales
by
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Streams
witnessed a considerable increase. In 2006, the majority of
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music
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sales
were the same on
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Streams
and
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CDs
, with
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just
about 30% on each. From the year 2016 onwards, it can be
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seen
that
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Streams
peaked at about 40% of
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purchases
while
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CDs
bottomed out at about 25%.

In 2011, although
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people
had
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started
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music
, it
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only
represented 35% of
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sales
. In 2014, Downloads peaked in 2014 at about 43% of
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sales
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fell to 30% by 2018.
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  American English
2 paragraphs
126 words
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