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Given in the bar charts are figures related to how much time children spend with their parents in five various age groups on Weekdays and Weekends.

Given in the bar charts are figures related to how much time children spend with their parents in five various age groups on Weekdays and Weekends. YdEG5
Given in the bar charts are figures related to how much time children spend with their parents in five various age groups on Weekdays and Weekends. Overall, the minority of children's time during the week was spent with Dad. While children spent most of their weekdays with their mom, on weekends they used their time with both dad and mom. In terms of weekdays, most children of all ages spent their time with their parents in total around between 8. 5 to 9 hours. While children aged 2-3s and 6-7s spent 1 hour with dad, those aged 0-1s, 4-5s and 8-9s spent more than double with their mom. Meanwhile, children’s time taken around 5 hours to their mom in most age groups. As for the weekends, the children belonging to the age group 0-1s spent about 30 minutes with father, 3. 5 hours with mother, and about 9 hours with both dad & mom. A similar pattern was registered on time which children aged 8-9s spent with their parents. Moreover, those in the age bracket 2-3s and 4-5s spent their time with mom and Both dad & mom mirrored each other, with the former 3 hours and the latter about 6 hours while time children spent with dad were 1 hour and 1. 5 hours, respectively. Meanwhile, children aged 6-7 year-olds spent about 30 minutes with dad, 4 hours with mom, and 10 hours in total.
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IELTS academic Given in the bar charts are figures related to how much time children spend with their parents in five various age groups on Weekdays and Weekends.

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