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Over a period of 15 years, three different companie's amount of produced waste has been illustrated in the graph.

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Over a period of 15 years, three different companie's amount of produced waste has been illustrated in the graph. To begin with, A company has the most manufactured waste troug out this graph. Eventhough, in 2000 the company had up to 12 tones of composed waste but after that composing of the waste gadually plunged to 8. 5 tones in 2015 which is quite an improvement. Although, for company B the second most produced waste amony three was composing 8. 7 tones of waste in 2000. However in 2005 there was a breackthrough in waste origination and it increased to 10. 5 tones. Though in 2005 there was sudden acceleration in produced waste by company B but after that year it started gradually decreasing and it decresed to 3 tones in 2015. Yet, for company c who have the lowest amount of composed waste had 4 tones of waste in 2000. Nonetheless, from 2000 created waste gradually escalated and in 2005 it was up to 6 tones but in 2010 the inflattion of produced waste was 7 tones. Since 2010 there was sudden inflation in the amount of produced was and in 2015 upto 10 tones of waste was created.
Over a period of 15 years, three
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companie
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produced
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waste
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company
has the most manufactured
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waste
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troug
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, in 2000 the
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company
had up to 12
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tones
of composed
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waste
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but
after that composing of the
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waste
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gadually
plunged to 8. 5
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tones
in 2015 which is quite an improvement. Although, for
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company
B the second most
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produced
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waste
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amony
three was composing 8. 7
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tones
of
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waste
in 2000.
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in 2005 there was a
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breackthrough
in
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waste
origination and it increased to 10. 5
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tones
. Though in 2005 there was sudden acceleration in
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produced
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waste
by
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company
B
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tones
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company
c who have the lowest amount of composed
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waste
had 4
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tones
of
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waste
in 2000. Nonetheless, from 2000 created
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waste
gradually
escalated and in 2005 it was up to 6
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tones
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but
in 2010 the
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inflattion
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produced
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waste
was 7
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tones
. Since 2010 there was sudden inflation in the amount of
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produced
was and in 2015
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upto
10
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IELTS academic Over a period of 15 years, three different companie's amount of produced waste has been illustrated in the graph.

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6.0
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