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the world’s water and the use of water in three various sectors in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada.

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The given pie charts and line graph illustrate the information about the world’s water and the use of water in three various sectors in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada. The general overview here is that the most of water in the world was saltwater, while ice and glaciers were the majority of freshwater, and The greatest amount of water was used in the Agriculture sector in Egypt and Saudi Arabia, Whereas Canada used the highest of water in the Industry part. According to the pic charts, it can be seen that Saltwater was the most in the number of world’ water, accounting for 97% compared to freshwater at only 3%. Moreover, freshwater indicated 79% of ice and glaciers which is higher more than groundwater and surface water at 20% and only 1%. Turning to the bar chart, it is clear that Egypt and Saudi Arabia shared a similar figure for water used in the agricultural part which accounted for over 70%. Neither two countries experienced a minimal figure of their water use in the domestic sector and the industrial sector. Canada, on the contrary, the most of water was used in the industry sector, with the figure almost 80%, while domestic part and agricultural sector used the lower at just over 10% and under 10% respectively.
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pie charts and line graph illustrate the information about the world’s
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water
and the
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use
of
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water
in three various
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sectors
in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada. The general overview here is that the most of
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water
in the world was saltwater, while ice and glaciers were the majority of freshwater, and The greatest amount of
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water
was
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used
in the Agriculture
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sector
in Egypt and Saudi Arabia, Whereas Canada
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used
the highest of
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water
in the Industry part.

According to the pic charts, it can be
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that Saltwater was the most in the number of world’
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, accounting for 97% compared to freshwater at
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only
3%.
Moreover
, freshwater indicated 79% of ice and glaciers which is higher more than groundwater and surface
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at 20% and
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only
1%.

Turning to the bar chart, it is
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clear
that Egypt and Saudi Arabia shared a similar figure for
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water
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used
in the agricultural part which accounted for over 70%. Neither two countries experienced a minimal figure of their
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water
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use
in the domestic
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and the industrial
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sector
. Canada,
on the contrary
, the most of
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water
was
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used
in the industry
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, with the figure almost 80%, while domestic part and agricultural
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the lower at
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over 10% and under 10%
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