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The average number of aspirants who is watched five diverse TV programs among three various youth groups are illustrated in the pie charts. Overall, it can be eventually commented that films, extremely commonly watched TV shows in all given age groups and was shared the almost same number. However, the news is least popular in 10-15 years old groups compare to both groups. By deep examination, it can be easily scrutinized that, the interest in watching sports as a TV program fall as age increased where the 10-15 year group mostly keen to watched sports and accounted 26, interest decreased 11 number in 16-20 age group followed by 10 in 21-25 age. Whereas, to watch films on TV shows a reverse trend in all given age groups. The Five numbers of differences noticed in each group for those who love to watch cartoons on TV, initiate with 10-15 age love to watch about 26, which is the highest whilst, 21-25 age accounted 21, which is lowest. Moving towards the rest of the information, although the news program is popular in 16-25 year group people, minor age group(10-15)least interested to wristwatch this.

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age
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group
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