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the alterations of the district park from 2004 to 2014.

the alterations of the district park from 2004 to 2014. 73nw5

The given maps illustrate the alterations of the district park from 2004 to 2014. The general overview here is that the park undergoes a noticeable transformation after passing ten years. According to the first map, it can be seen that the access located to the northwest tip of the park, with the football pitch in the centre, there was a tennis court to the north with situated next to below it was a children’s play space and on the south of, it there was a big green space along with the pond beside it. The car park was located on the right side of the entrance. Ten years later, the football ground located in the centre of the park remain unaffected, while the location of the tennis court was unchanged but its size expanded, as does the children’s play space, albeit with children soft play zone. On the contrary, the green zone was reduced in its size to make way for a toilet and a cafe to the north. Moreover, the pond has been turned into a boating zone with a new picnic area beside it. In addition, a cycling path was constructed around the park edge.

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given
 maps illustrate the alterations of the district You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 from 2004 to 2014. The general overview here is that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 undergoes a noticeable transformation after passing ten years.

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 map, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the access located to the northwest tip of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, with the football pitch in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
, there was a tennis court to the north with situated next
 to below it was a children’s play space and on the south of, it there was a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 green space along with the pond beside it. The car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
was located
 on the right side of the entrance.

Ten years later, the football ground located in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 remain unaffected, while the location of the tennis court was unchanged
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 its size expanded, as does the children’s play space, albeit with children soft play zone. On the contrary
, the green zone was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 in its size to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for a toilet and a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 to the north. Moreover
, the pond has been turned
 into a boating zone with a new picnic area beside it. In addition
, a cycling path was constructed
 around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 edge. 