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Maps of the island ('Now' and 'Twenty years ago'},

Maps of the island ('Now' and 'Twenty years ago'}, eAGGx
These two maps compare how the island has changed in recent 20 years. Overall, there have been significant changes, particularly the presence of modern facilities and also the increase of population and traffics. In twenty years ago, the island was a rural area. Notwithstanding, there has been a spurt growth of modern facilities and population. As a result, the island becomes more populous and busier present-day. There has been a great deal of development in the south of the island. A motorway has been constructed through the center, which divides the existing farm from a newly skyscrapers and increased residential area. The church and pond, however, still remain the same as they always were. In the north of the island, a new stadium is built near the hills. Moreover, a large hospital with a space for car parking is demolished in the east. To the east of the hills are the windmill and bridge, features of the original island.
These two maps compare how the
island
has
changed
in recent 20 years.
Overall
, there have been significant
changes
,
particularly
the presence of modern facilities and
also
the increase of population and traffics.

In twenty years ago, the
island
was a rural area. Notwithstanding, there has been a spurt growth of modern facilities and population.
As a result
, the
island
becomes more populous and busier present-day. There has been a great deal of development in the south of the
island
. A motorway has
been constructed
through the center, which divides the existing farm from a
newly
skyscrapers and increased residential area. The church and pond,
however
,
still
remain the same as they always were.

In the north of the
island
, a new stadium
is built
near the hills.
Moreover
, a large hospital with a space for car parking
is demolished
in the east. To the east of the hills are the windmill and bridge, features of the original
island
.

IELTS academic Maps of the island ('Now' and 'Twenty years ago'},

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
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