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the various kinds of political parties which show the time period of before and after the general election of 2015

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The charts illustrate the various kinds of political parties which show the time period of before and after the general election of 2015, respectively. At the beginning, support of conservatives was 41%, 6 months after the election, it steadily increased to 45% and 12 months after the election it dropped to 35%. Besides, undecided was commenced at 4% and it rose to 10% in next 6 months, then in a year, its popularity increased 10% more to 20%. The popularity for green party is remained constant before and 6 months after the election. Moreover, 12 months after the election, it fell significantly to 5%. However, Liberal Democrats had 19% popularity before the election, suddenly it declined to almost half of its popularity to 10% 6 months after the election, also in more 6 months it has lost a little popularity of 2% which estimates to 8%. Overall, Conservatives had the highest popularity and it continued after 6 months of election but lost 10% popularity after a year of the election.
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IELTS academic the various kinds of political parties which show the time period of before and after the general election of 2015

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