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The picture demonstrates the different steps to growing bananas and delivering to customers. As can be seen from the diagram, there are 7 main stages in the whole banana production. The process starts with the growing stage and ending with the buying ones First of all, bananas grow between 9 months to a year and the weather also plays a pivotal role in the banana growth process so to make sure the banana has the best quality, the outside temperature should be about 25-30 C and need plenty of rain in terms of natural irrigation. After, the bananas must be picked when they still green. Then they will be checked to make sure all the good fruits are kept and any bad or poor are removed. During shipping the bananas must be stored in the fridges with low temperature( 13, 3 C) to keep them fresh and safe for bananas. Coming to the resting sections, bananas are kept in a special room where the bananas become yellow. The entire banana producing process concludes after despatch to supermarkets or others for customer consumption.

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