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The graphs below illustrate the outcomes of a survey on adult tuition system. The first image gives information about study reasons of adults, whereas the second image demonstrates how tuition costs of adults must be funded.

The graphs below illustrate the outcomes of a survey on adult tuition system. The first image gives information about study reasons of adults, whereas the second image demonstrates how tuition costs of adults must be funded. Bwbkj
The graphs below illustrate the outcomes of a survey on adult tuition system. The first image gives information about study reasons of adults, whereas the second image demonstrates how tuition costs of adults must be funded. Overall, it can be seen that the main reasons for adult education are their interest in subject and to gain qualifications. Moreover, the huge proportion of education costs has to pay by individuals who want to study. In the first graph, we can see that to get qualifications and curiosity in subjects are the basic reasons of adult education due to study with 38% and 40%, respectively. Some adults who want to enjoy studying and increase prospects of their promotion are completely equal at 20%, while the percentage of adults who consider their study can be helpful for current job only 2% more than they? Finally, the remaining two options which people want to contact others and change their jobs are below than 15%. In the second graph, individuals have the highest percentage between two options with 40% because of education costs, whereas employer pays 35%of adult education costs and a quarter belong to taxpayer.
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with 38% and 40%,
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who want to enjoy studying and increase prospects of their promotion are completely equal at 20%, while the percentage of
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adults
who consider their
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can be helpful for
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and a quarter belong to taxpayer.
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IELTS academic The graphs below illustrate the outcomes of a survey on adult tuition system. The first image gives information about study reasons of adults, whereas the second image demonstrates how tuition costs of adults must be funded.

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