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The utilization of internet in Canada

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The provided Horizontal bar graph depicts the utilization of internet by Canada's masses during the 2000. Overall, At a brisk gaze, it is noticeable that, E - mail utilization was most popular trend among Canadian youngsters and other activities were least in the given specific years. It is crystal clear from the graph, in 2000, the majority of Canadian Male were preferred electronic mail. It was registered at 48%. It was followed by females which was 7% less than men. Social websites were ranked second, it's utilization was common in Canada. Masculine utilized 24% internet community and Feminine's were four percent more utilized the social networks. Moving ahead, Canadian's masses were minimum preferred to online shopping. Whereas, Men and Women were utilized with 13% and 19% respectively. Furthermore, Miscellaneous activities were least as compared to others activities. There was female utilized 18% on other services and men were less than half to women.

The provided Horizontal bar graph depicts the utilization of internet by Canada's masses during the 2000.

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