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the two tables illustrate the rate of international students from China the USA and India in two countries in 2002-2003 and 2003-2004.

the two tables illustrate the rate of international students from China the USA and India in two countries in 2002-2003 and 2003-2004. R0Dmo
the two tables illustrate the rate of international students from China the USA and India in two countries in 2002-2003 and 2003-2004. it is clear that the number of students who went to the USA decreased significantly meanwhile that of students in Canada witnessed a sharp rising. The students in the USA more than that in Canada. According to Canada, the quantity of china with 5400 students which was the highest figure followed by the USA and India with 5000 and 2100 students respectively. The pupil of China was threefold as high as that of India in 2002-2003. Most of the rate saw considerable going up in 2003-2004. There was a steady improvement in China from 5400 to 7850. In the US went up by 454 and in Indie witnessed to 2835. The total number of students in 2002-2003 was 59870 students and that jumped quickly in 2003-2004 by 10134 students. The number is changed to a percentage of about 17% for total. In terms of the USA, the data of students in India experienced a significant falling from 200000 students in 2002 to 182000 students in 2003-2004 meanwhile the quantity in China more popular than the students of India at 110000 students and 31000 students respectively in 2002-2003. The total was 581600 students. The data of China increased slightly with 116600 in 2003-2004 and that of India saw marginal upwards trend to 33100 people. The total number of students in 2002-2003 was 5816000 students and that jumped quickly in 2003-2004 with 570000 students.
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from China the USA and India in two countries in 2002-2003 and 2003-2004.

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who went to the USA decreased
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in Canada witnessed a sharp rising. The
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in the USA more than that in Canada.

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which was the highest figure followed by the USA and India with 5000 and 2100
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respectively
. The pupil of China was threefold as high as that of India in 2002-2003. Most of the rate
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considerable going up in 2003-2004. There was a steady improvement in China from 5400 to 7850. In the US went up by 454 and in Indie witnessed to 2835. The total
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of
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in 2002-2003 was 59870
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and that jumped
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in 2003-2004 by 10134
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. The
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to a percentage of about 17% for total.

In terms of the USA, the data of
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in India experienced a significant falling from 200000
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in 2002 to 182000
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in 2003-2004 meanwhile the quantity in China more popular than the
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of India at 110000
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and 31000
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respectively
in 2002-2003. The total was 581600
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. The data of China increased
slightly
with 116600 in 2003-2004 and that of India
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marginal upwards trend to 33100
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of
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in 2002-2003 was 5816000
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and that jumped
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IELTS academic the two tables illustrate the rate of international students from China the USA and India in two countries in 2002-2003 and 2003-2004.

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