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some feel that young people spend too much time cut off from nature

some feel that young people spend too much time cut off from nature 70kjX
It is believed that the young generation spends a lot of time separated from natural life. Therefore, we should encourage the youth to have more interaction with green spaces. Besides, some people feel that this is the reality of the contemporary world and it is difficult to deal with. It is believed that the young generation spends a lot of time separated from natural life. Therefore, we should encourage the youth to have more interaction with green spaces. Besides, some people feel that this is the reality of the contemporary world and it is difficult to deal with. It is believed that the young generation spends a lot of time separated from natural life. Therefore, we should encourage the youth to have more interaction with green spaces. Besides, some people feel that this is the reality of the contemporary world and it is difficult to deal with. It is believed that the young generation spends a lot of time separated from natural life. Therefore, we should encourage the youth to have more interaction with green spaces. Besides, some people feel that this is the reality of the contemporary world and it is difficult to deal with. It is believed that the young generation spends a lot of time separated from natural life. Therefore, we should encourage the youth to have more interaction with green spaces. Besides, some people feel that this is the reality of the contemporary world and it is difficult to deal with.
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IELTS academic some feel that young people spend too much time cut off from nature

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  American English
1 paragraphs
245 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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