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The provided chart gives depict data about the proportion of cars produced in Argentina, Australia, and Thailand in 6 years commencing with 2003. As is observed, what stands out from the chart is that Thailand hold the greatest number of cars produced. The noticeable point is that, the production of cars in Argentina and Australia has the opposite trend. In a closer inspection, in 2003, the amount of cars made in Argentina and Australia were 235, 088 and 452, 163, respectively. The figure for Thailand was 735, 852, which almost tripled and doubled Argentina and Australia proportions. During the 3-year-period, the number was totally transformed. The number of cars produced in Argentina slightly rose up to 352, 759 and Thailand grew up to more than 1 million in 2006. On the other hand, Australia had a marginal declined to 341, 268. Turning to the remaining period, the amount of Argentina kept go up to 466, 089. By contrast, the proportion of Australia still went down to 245, 624 in 2009. The number in Thailand had a significant fluctuation and decrease to 999, 963.
The provided chart gives depict data about the proportion of
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produced in Argentina, Australia, and Thailand in 6 years commencing with 2003.

As
is observed
, what stands out from the chart is that Thailand hold the greatest
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number
of
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cars
produced. The noticeable point is that, the production of
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cars
in Argentina and Australia has the opposite trend.

In a closer inspection, in 2003, the amount of
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cars
made in Argentina and Australia were 235, 088 and 452, 163,
respectively
. The figure for Thailand was 735, 852, which almost tripled and doubled Argentina and Australia proportions. During the 3-year-period, the
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number
was
totally
transformed. The
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number
of
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cars
produced in Argentina
slightly
rose up to 352, 759 and Thailand grew up to more than 1 million in 2006.
On the other hand
, Australia had a marginal declined to 341, 268.

Turning to the remaining period, the amount of Argentina
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kept
go up to 466, 089. By contrast, the proportion of Australia
still
went down to 245, 624 in 2009. The
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in Thailand had a significant fluctuation and decrease to 999, 963.
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