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The two supplied maps represent the discrepancy of an island before and after the facilities being constructed.

The two supplied maps represent the discrepancy of an island before and after the facilities being constructed. r6e0l

The two supplied maps represent the discrepancy of an island before and after the facilities being constructed. At first glance, it is apparent that in the past neither tourist services were situated on the island while it ameliorated into a resort after people had commercialised the island. However, the entire size of the island and some trees remains unchanged. In terms of some prominent changes, after the construction, the unoccupied island was built up two huge areas for accomodation. Moreover, the restaurant and the reception were placed in the center, surrounded with the vehicle track while the footpath was constructed between each rooms. In addition, the port was set up and used for sailing boats. Despite the fact that myriad developments presented on this island, some areas were similar and utilised for a new entertainment. Such as in the East, an immence space had no differences and still kept its primitiveness. Also, some trees were not cut down and the beach in the West was opened for swimming.

The two supplied maps represent the discrepancy of an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and after the facilities being constructed
.

At first
 glance, it is apparent that in the past neither tourist services were situated
 on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 while it ameliorated into a resort after This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 had Possible spelling mistake. 'commercialised' is British English.commercialized
commercialised
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. However
, the entire size of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 trees remains unchanged.

In terms of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 prominent This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
, after the construction, the unoccupied You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
was built
 up two huge areas for Possible spelling mistake found.accommodation
accomodation
. Moreover
, the restaurant and the reception were placed
 in the center, surrounded with the vehicle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 while the footpath was constructed
 between each The noun should be probably in the singular form: "room"?room
rooms
. In addition
, the port was set
 up and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for sailing boats.

Despite the fact that myriad developments presented on this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 areas were similar and Possible spelling mistake. 'utilised' is British English.utilized
utilised
 for a new entertainment. Such as in the East, an Possible spelling mistake found.immense
immence
 space had no differences and still
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 its primitiveness. Also
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 trees were not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down and the beach in the West was opened
 for swimming. 