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The provided diagram represents the development of the village from 1995 to the present which is separated into two distinct maps.

The provided diagram represents the development of the village from 1995 to the present which is separated into two distinct maps. 7LAe2
The provided diagram represents the development of the village from 1995 to the present which is separated into two distinct maps. At first glance, it is apparent that some particular areas were replaced for commercialisation and inhabitants’ needs. However, many new infrastructures as buildings and road were constructed beside a few primitive places. From two maps, it is observed that there was a similarity between the farmland, the forest park, sequences of shops and fish markets which were demolished for modern buildings. While in the East, the farmland and the park were superseded for golf and tennis, restaurant and apartments took the place of shops and fish markets in the South part of the village. In addition, the cafe in the Southwest and housing were situated samely since 1995 to nowadays. Differently, one more road with trees surrounded was built up and made a T-junction in front of the housing. Also, some new areas were opened as the car park and the fish port which was located at the fringe of the village.
The provided diagram represents the development of the village from 1995 to the present which
is separated
into two distinct maps.

At
first
glance, it is apparent that
some
particular areas
were replaced
for
commercialisation
and inhabitants’ needs.
However
,
many
new infrastructures as buildings and road
were constructed
beside a few primitive places.

From two maps, it
is observed
that there was a similarity between the farmland, the forest park, sequences of shops and fish markets which
were demolished
for modern buildings. While in the East, the farmland and the park
were superseded
for golf and tennis, restaurant and apartments took the place of shops and fish markets in the South part of the village.

In addition
, the
cafe
in the Southwest and housing
were situated
samely
since 1995 to nowadays.
Differently
, one more road with trees surrounded
was built
up and made a T-junction in front of the housing.
Also
,
some
new areas
were opened
as the car park and the fish port which
was located
at the fringe of the village.
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IELTS academic The provided diagram represents the development of the village from 1995 to the present which is separated into two distinct maps.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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