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The table below gives information about passengers arrivals and departures at the six main airports serving London for the year 2012

The table below gives information about passengers arrivals and departures at the six main airports serving London for the year 2012 m96eq
The table above illustrates information about traveller arrivals and departures in the London airports including six main airports serving in 2012. The most crowded airport in London was Heathrow with 70 million visitors because of its close distance from the center of London. Due to its crowded nature, Heathrow airport also had the highest percentage of passengers even though London City had the shortest distance to central London with 11 km, there were 3 million passengers, which was 35 percent less than Heathrow. However, Southend Airport had an increase of 135 %, which meant it had the biggest change from 2011 and was the highest among all airports in the table. In London City, the number of passengers was lower than Gatwick, although London is not as far as Gatwick.
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arrivals and departures in the London
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airports
including six main
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airports
serving in 2012.

The most crowded
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airport
in London was Heathrow with 70 million visitors
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because
of its close distance from the center of London. Due to its crowded nature, Heathrow
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airport
also
had the highest percentage of passengers
even though
London City had the shortest distance to central London with 11 km, there were 3 million passengers, which was 35 percent less than Heathrow.
However
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Southend
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Airport
had an increase of 135 %, which meant it had the biggest
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change
from 2011 and was the highest among all
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airports
in the table. In London City, the number of passengers was lower than Gatwick, although London is not as far as Gatwick.
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about passengers arrivals and departures at the six main airports serving London for the year 2012

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