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the two plans below show Pancha Village in 2005 and 2015. Write a summary of the information. Select and report the main features and make the comparisions where are neccesary

the two plans below show Pancha Village in 2005 and 2015. Write a summary of the information. Select and report the main features and make the comparisions where are neccesary aAn8o
Given is a comparing between Pancha Village in 2005 and 2015. Overall, various development were recorded in the area, especially those related to the surrounding road. It can be seen from the map that, the village has underwent a sharply change over 2005 to 2015, especially the road. In 2005, the village still underdeveloped with the small road contain amount of rock. Till 2015, the road is rebuilt more fluently with a number of vehicles. Moreover, in the west of the road, the market extremely quite deserted with a few stalls in 2005 until 2015, there are not only much more stalls and more bustling it also some power poles loactes within walking distance from the market. Contrariwise with the west of the road, there are a marginal fluctuate in the east of the road. in 2015, there are more building in the pagoda while the biggest building in 2005 does not exist. Notwithstanding that there are fewer house, a number of notice boards and the Interntet cables appear. Besides that, primary school was witnessed in the dramatical change to become iter-level school includes both primary and secendary school.
Given
is a comparing between
Pancha
Village in 2005 and 2015.

Overall
, various development
were recorded
in the area,
especially
those related to the surrounding road.

It can be
seen
from the map that, the village has
underwent
a
sharply
change
over 2005 to 2015,
especially
the
road
. In 2005, the village
still
underdeveloped with the
small
road
contain amount of rock. Till 2015, the
road
is rebuilt more
fluently
with a number of vehicles.
Moreover
, in the west of the
road
, the market
extremely
quite deserted with a few stalls in 2005 until 2015, there are not
only
much more stalls and more bustling it
also
some
power poles
loactes
within walking distance from the market.

Contrariwise with the west of the
road
, there are a marginal fluctuate in the east of the
road
.
in
2015, there are more building in the pagoda while the biggest building in 2005 does not exist. Notwithstanding that there are fewer
house
, a number of notice boards and the
Interntet
cables appear.
Besides
that, primary school
was witnessed
in the
dramatical
change
to become
iter-level
school includes both primary and
secendary
school.
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IELTS academic the two plans below show Pancha Village in 2005 and 2015. Write a summary of the information. Select and report the main features and make the comparisions where are neccesary

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