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The plan A below show the health center in 2005. Plan B show same places in the parent day and summarize map information.

The plan A below show the health center in 2005. Plan B show same places in the parent day and summarize map information. eKo1V
The provided maps illustrate the health care center in two ways such as plan A and Plan B. The information of healthcare center is given for 2005 and present day. Overall, it can be seen that the maximum change occurred took place on the northeast side. In contrast, the minimal change occurred between the northeast side and the southeast side. Looking at the graph in detail, in 2005, the physiotherapy room was on the north side, but after certain time the room of physiotherapy as it is before they had throughout the period. However, on the north side, there was no room along with physiotherapy room in 2005, but the room of minor operations is established in present day. In contrast, the car parking had 12 spaces in 2005, but it is augmented and reached 30 spaces in present-day on the Southside, whereas, the entrance was shifted to the southeast side from the Southside. Analyzing the other areas, for the southeast side, the consulting room 3 was substituted by the reception desk and children's play areas throughout the period. On the other hand, the area of office has been mitigated on the northeast side between 2005 and present day. Despite this, the consulting room 1 and 2 were on the southwest side, but it replaced by consulting rooms 3 and 4 in present day. Nevertheless, the consulting room 1 and 2 moved to the southside in present day.
The provided maps illustrate the health care center in two ways such as plan A and Plan B. The information of healthcare center is
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present
day.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the maximum
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change
occurred took place on the northeast side.
In contrast
, the minimal
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change
occurred between the northeast side and the southeast side.

Looking at the graph in detail, in 2005, the physiotherapy
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room
was on the north side,
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but
after certain time the
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room
of physiotherapy as it is
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before
they had throughout the period.
However
, on the north side, there was no
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room
along with physiotherapy
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room
in 2005,
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but
the
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room
of minor operations
is established
in
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present
day.
In contrast
, the car parking had 12 spaces in 2005,
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but
it
is augmented
and reached 30 spaces in present-day on the Southside, whereas, the entrance
was shifted
to the southeast side from the Southside.

Analyzing the other areas, for the southeast side, the
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consulting
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room
3
was substituted
by the reception desk and children's play areas throughout the period.
On the other hand
, the area of office has
been mitigated
on the northeast side between 2005 and
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present
day. Despite this, the
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consulting
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room
1 and 2 were on the southwest side,
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but
it replaced by
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consulting
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rooms
3 and 4 in
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present
day.
Nevertheless
, the
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consulting
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room
1 and 2
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moved
to the
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southside
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IELTS academic The plan A below show the health center in 2005. Plan B show same places in the parent day and summarize map information.

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