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The two pie charts show the sources of income of ANZ theatres and heritage trust, a government funded organization, in the year 1980 and 2000.

The two pie charts show the sources of income of ANZ theatres and heritage trust, a government funded organization, in the year 1980 and 2000. q6B3X
The sources of income of ANZ theatres and heritage trust are depicted by two pie charts in the years 1980 and 2000. Calibration of data is done in percentage. Overall, the contribution of income from individuals and other organizations showed an upward trend while all other remaining sources revealed a downward trend. It is clearly seen from the charts, revenue from individuals and other companies made up about one-third of its income in 1980, which rose by twofold in the span of 20years. While, the contribution from the government was nearly 25% in 1980, which fell slightly to 20% in 2000. Moreover, sales of shops accounted for one fifth in 1980; however, this ratio fell sharply to 11% in 2000. Furthermore, the last source of income, the tickets comprised significantly less at 7% in 2000, compared to that of 22% in 1980.
The sources of
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income
of ANZ
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theatres
and heritage trust
are depicted
by two pie charts in the years 1980 and 2000. Calibration of data
is done
in percentage.

Overall
, the contribution of
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income
from individuals and other organizations
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showed
an upward trend while all other remaining sources revealed a downward trend.

It is
clearly
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seen
from the charts, revenue from individuals and other
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companies
made up about one-third of its
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income
in 1980, which rose by twofold in the span of 20years. While, the contribution from the
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government
was
nearly
25% in 1980, which fell
slightly
to 20% in 2000.

Moreover
, sales of shops accounted for one fifth in 1980;
however
, this ratio fell
sharply
to 11% in 2000.
Furthermore
, the last source of
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income
, the tickets comprised
significantly
less at 7% in 2000, compared to that of 22% in 1980.
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IELTS academic The two pie charts show the sources of income of ANZ theatres and heritage trust, a government funded organization, in the year 1980 and 2000.

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