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the process of producing cement and how to use concrete for building.

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The diagrams give information about the process of producing cement and how to use concrete for building. Overall, a closer look at the processes highlights the fact that there are five stages in the process of making cement. However, the process of making concrete production only two steps. Looking at the process in more detail, at the first step of the process, limestone and clay are put in a machine called a crusher and become powder. the power being mixed and brought into a roating heater where it is heated in temperature. it is then moving on gender and then cement is produced. Finally, cement is packed into bags and is ready for production of concrete. The process of making concrete is combing different materials. The mixture is cement 15% and water 10%. After that adds 25% of sand and 50 of gravel. This mixture is put into a concrete mixer which can be used for building purposes.
The diagrams give information about the
process
of producing
cement
and how to
use
concrete for building.

Overall
, a closer look at the
processes
highlights the fact that there are five stages in the
process
of making
cement
.
However
, the
process
of making concrete production
only
two steps.

Looking at the
process
in more detail, at the
first
step of the
process
, limestone and clay
are put
in a machine called a crusher and become powder.
the
power
being mixed
and brought into a
roating
heater where it
is heated
in temperature.
it
is then moving on gender and then
cement
is produced
.
Finally
,
cement
is packed
into bags and is ready for production of concrete.

The
process
of making concrete is combing
different
materials. The mixture is
cement
15% and water 10%. After that
adds
25% of sand and 50 of gravel. This mixture
is put
into a concrete mixer which can be
used
for building purposes.
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