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The two pie charts show about the main energy source in usa in year 1980amd 1990

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The information regarding the utilisation of five energy sources in USA in the years 1980 and 1990 is represented by the supplied pie charts Having an overview, it is crystal clear that oil was the major source consumed in both years; However, the use of nuclear power was doubled in just ten years. After having myopic observation it is identified that in 1990, oil was the main source used for producing energy, value was accounted at 42%, which in 1990 dropped down and made nearly one third out of total proportion. On the other hand, a negligible difference of 1% can be seen in terms of natural gas used for energy generation, value was 26% in 1980 and 25% in 1990 On further analysis, 22% of energy was manufactured by coal in 1980, which ballooned to 27%. in year 1990. Likewise, the energy produced by nuclear power in 1980 was two fold of the energy generated by same source in 1990, value was nearly 5%. Moreover, a huge similarity can be seen among hydroelectric power, the percentum was 5% in 1980 and 1990 respectively.

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