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The given process demonstrates how wood for commercial use is produced.

The given process demonstrates how wood for commercial use is produced. qaMJP

The given process demonstrates how wood for commercial use is produced. As can be seen, there are 3 main steps involved in the production, starting with felling of the trees in the forest and ending with distributing wooden furniture to the store. First of all, the process commences when people go into the forest and are felled of the trees by felling machine. People are cut it into the logs before being shipped to saw mill. Next, the logs are cut the bark of trees before sawed it into timber. Following that, they are treated mold to make the standard wood. The process of starting is put wet woods into the kiln and heated it with high temperature to make moisture water from woods and dried before being used the furniture. Then, the procedure continues when it is processed to make products from wood such as chair, table or door. Finally, the wooden furniture is delivered and showed at the store.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 process demonstrates how You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlumberwoodlandtimber
wood
 for commercial This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
is produced
.

As can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
, there are 3 main steps involved in the production, starting with felling of the trees in the forest and ending with distributing wooden furniture to the store.

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First of all
, the process commences when This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 go into the forest and are felled
 of the trees by felling machine. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 it into the logs This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being shipped
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 mill. Next
, the logs are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 the bark of trees This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 sawed it into timber. Following that, they are treated
 mold to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the standard You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlumberwoodlandtimber
wood
. The process of starting is put
 wet woods into the kiln and heated it with high temperature to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 moisture water from woods and dried This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 the furniture.

Then, the procedure continues when it is processed
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 products from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlumberwoodlandtimber
wood
 such as chair, table or door.

Finally
, the wooden furniture is delivered
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 at the store. 