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The graph below shows percentage of tourists staying on islan during 2010-2017

The graph below shows percentage of tourists staying on islan during 2010-2017 6mrOW
The graph provides information about the number of visitors visited a Caribbean Island byvto types of. . . and total number between 2010-2017. Overall, what stands out from graph is that three trends is visible. The number of visitors who stayed on cruise ships dipped slightly in 2010 and recovered in 2012. Then the number of visitors increased steady year on year, it overtook visitors stayed on island between 2015 and 2016. After that received to 2 million in 2017. Regarding to the visitors stayed island it reminded stable during 2010-2011, despite increasing steady 7. 5 million of tourists on island in 2011, the visitors increased significantly until 2013 that received to 1. 5 million. After that it remained stable until 2015. Then stayed dipped and recovered during 2015-2017. Although the number of visitors stayed on island were more than who stayed on cruise ships at the beginning of period, they were 0. 5 million more than who stayed on cruise ships at the end of period. There was a significant increase in total number of tourists between 2010 and 2015, it increased from 1 million to 2. 7 million then experienced a stable trend until 2016. After that reached a peak of 3. 5 million at 2017. In conclusion, the number of visitors visited Caribbean island fluctuate a lot. In first years of period tourists were more interested in staying on island however at the end more tourists were stayed on cruise ships.
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between 2010-2017.
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, it overtook
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between 2015 and 2016.
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it reminded stable during 2010-2011, despite increasing steady 7. 5
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in 2011, the
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. After that it remained stable until 2015. Then
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dipped and recovered during 2015-2017. Although the
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at the beginning of period, they were 0. 5
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of period. There was a significant increase in total
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between 2010 and 2015, it increased from 1
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to 2. 7
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then experienced a stable trend until 2016.
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visited Caribbean
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fluctuate a lot. In
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were more interested in staying on
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