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The given flow chart shows the various sources of natural gas and the way it is distributed. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given chart describes the distribution flow of Natural gas and obtaining of gas from various sources. The main sources for Natural gas are from a Gas well, Oil well and importing through ships from distant places. The distribution to regions occurs in various methods like road, rails, and pipelines etc. After obtaining gas from its source refining process happens in Gas plants, refineries etc before reaching the main storage. Once after the gas reaches the storage it is then distributed using pipelines to banks located at different regions. Later, from these storages, it then transported through road containers and rail wagons to retail storages and further to retail consumers in small amounts. Rail wagons are expensive and can hold a capacity of 24000 liters whereas, containers using roads have larger storage of 40, 000 liters and is less costly. The transported gas is then bought to retail stores which can hold up to a capacity of 120, 000 liters from where it is further distributed using small delivery trucks to retail consumers
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chart
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describes
the distribution flow of Natural
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gas
and obtaining of
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gas
from various sources.

The main sources for Natural
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gas
are from a
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Gas
well, Oil well and importing through ships from distant places.
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The
distribution to regions occurs in various methods like road, rails, and pipelines etc.

After obtaining
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gas
from its source refining process happens in
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Gas
plants, refineries etc
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before
reaching the main
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storage
.
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Once
after the
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gas
reaches the
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storage
it is then distributed using pipelines to banks located at
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different
regions. Later, from these
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storages
, it then transported through road containers and rail wagons to
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retail
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storages
and
further
to
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retail
consumers in
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small
amounts.

Rail wagons are expensive and can hold a capacity of 24000 liters whereas, containers using roads have larger
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storage
of 40, 000 liters and is less costly. The transported
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gas
is then
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bought
to
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retail
stores which can hold up to a capacity of 120, 000 liters from where it is
further
distributed using
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small
delivery trucks to
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retail
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consumers
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IELTS academic The given flow chart shows the various sources of natural gas and the way it is distributed.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
172 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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