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THE CHART BELOWGIVES INOFRMATION ON THE PERCENTAGE OF BRITISH PEOPLE GIVNG MONEY TO CHARITY BY AGE RANGE FOR THE YEAR 1990 AND 2010.

THE CHART BELOWGIVES INOFRMATION ON THE PERCENTAGE OF BRITISH PEOPLE GIVNG MONEY TO CHARITY BY AGE RANGE FOR THE YEAR 1990 AND 2010. eEg0O
THE TABLE CHART ILLUSTRATES THE AMOUNT DONATES BY BRITISHERS IN 1990 AND 2010. THE UNITS ARE MEASURED IN PERCENTILE. OVERALL, IN INITIAL YEAR THE HIGHEST AMOUNT GIVEN AS CHARITY BY PEOPLE AGE FROM 36-50 WHILE, IN LATTER YEAR THE 51-56 DONTAES HIGHER AMOUNT THAN OTHER AGE RANGES. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, INDIVIDUALS IN BRITAIN BETWEEN 18-25 OLD AGES DONATES MORE THAN 15% IN 1990 THEN, IT DECLINED TO AROUND 7% IN 2010. THE PERCENT OF CHARITY IN BEGINNING SPAN IS MERELY ABOVE 30% AND IT SLIPS BY 7% IN TWENTY YEARS. MOREOVER, THE MID-AGE PEOPLE DONATES THE HIGHEST PERCENT OF FUNDS IN 1990 AS 42%, IT FALLS TO 35% IN FINAL SPAN. THE BAR CHART FURTHER COLLATE THAT, THE MONETARY DONATION PROVIDES BY MASSES FROM 51-65 YEARS IN 1990 AND 2010 IS 35% AND APPROXIMATELY 40% RESPECTIVELY. FINALLY, THE AGED BRITISH POPULANCE GIVES NEAR BY 32% IN STARTING PERIOD WHICH INCREASED NEGLIGIBLY TO 35% IN 2010.
THE TABLE CHART ILLUSTRATES THE AMOUNT DONATES BY BRITISHERS IN 1990 AND 2010. THE UNITS
ARE MEASURED
IN PERCENTILE.

OVERALL
, IN INITIAL
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YEAR
THE HIGHEST AMOUNT
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GIVEN
AS CHARITY BY
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PEOPLE
AGE FROM 36-50 WHILE, IN LATTER
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YEAR
THE 51-56
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DONTAES
HIGHER AMOUNT THAN OTHER AGE RANGES.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
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THAT, INDIVIDUALS IN BRITAIN BETWEEN 18-25
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AGES DONATES MORE THAN 15% IN 1990 THEN, IT DECLINED TO AROUND 7% IN 2010. THE PERCENT OF CHARITY IN BEGINNING SPAN IS
MERELY
ABOVE 30% AND IT SLIPS BY 7% IN TWENTY YEARS.
MOREOVER
, THE MID-AGE
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PEOPLE
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DONATES
THE HIGHEST PERCENT OF FUNDS IN 1990 AS 42%, IT FALLS TO 35% IN FINAL SPAN.

THE BAR CHART
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, THE MONETARY DONATION PROVIDES BY MASSES FROM 51-65 YEARS IN 1990 AND 2010 IS 35% AND APPROXIMATELY 40%
RESPECTIVELY
.
FINALLY
, THE AGED BRITISH
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POPULANCE
GIVES
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NEAR BY
32% IN STARTING PERIOD WHICH INCREASED
NEGLIGIBLY
TO 35% IN 2010.

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