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The two pie charts compared how many people winned the Oscar by movie type of two years 2003 and 2008.

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The two pie charts compared how many people winned the Oscar by movie type of two years 2003 and 2008. In general, thriller films and action films was two film genres accounted for the highest percentage of TV series, while others had a low share in two years. Out of seven categories of film, the thriller was the one which had the highest number of Oscar winners peaked at nearly a half in 2003. However, this type in 2008 was noticeably fell to approximately four-fifths. Following by action film, from 2003 to 2008 witnessed a dramatic rise of about 10% in the number of Oscar winners. On the other hand, documentary, romance and comedy films did not significant changes, stood at about 15%, 10% and 5% respectively over the two years. With regard to the sience fiction films, the number of Oscar winners was 20% in 2008, 2 times as much as that of 2003. In contrast, with respect to the horror film genre, this figure was 20% in 2003 and halved compared to 2008.
The two pie charts compared how
many
people
winned
the Oscar by movie type of two years 2003 and 2008.

In general
, thriller films and action films was two film genres accounted for the highest percentage of TV series, while others had a low share in two years.

Out of seven categories of film, the thriller was the one which had the highest number of Oscar winners peaked at
nearly
a half in 2003.
However
, this type in 2008 was
noticeably
fell to approximately four-fifths. Following by action film, from 2003 to 2008 witnessed a dramatic rise of about 10% in the number of Oscar winners.

On the other hand
, documentary, romance and comedy films did not significant
changes
, stood at about 15%, 10% and 5%
respectively
over the two years. With regard to the
sience
fiction films, the number of Oscar winners was 20% in 2008, 2 times as much as that of 2003.
In contrast
, with respect to the horror film genre, this figure was 20% in 2003 and halved compared to 2008.
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