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The graphs provide information about the computer ownership and by level of education rate of the population from 2002 to 2010. Overall, the computer ownership graph illustrates upward trend throughout this years. Whereas, the computer ownership by education level graph depicts upward trend too. Moreover, the ownership of computers percentages is increased year by year. In terms of computer ownership graph, in the years 2002 and 2010. in 2002, the computer ownership percentage was less than 60 and after 2 years it was about 60%. After that, in the year 2006, the rate was below 70 then in next 2 years it became approximately 70%. Furthermore, it was considerably less than 80% in 2010. In the course of computer ownership by education level, about 15% of people have the ownership of computer who did not have any high school diploma in 2002. Whereas, in 2010 it was above 40%. The people who graduated from high school and have a ownership of computer their rate was well below 40 in 2002 which is increased about 30% in 2010. Moreover, the people who did not finished college their percentages of computer ownership approximately 55 and 85 in 2002 and 2010. Whereas, in case of bachelor's degree (about 70 and 90%). In the last, postgraduate qualification their rate was around 75 and 95% in the years 2002 and 2010.

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