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The bar charts below give information on traveling to different Australian destinations and the nights spent there. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Your essay must stay between 150-200 words.

The bar charts below give information on traveling to different Australian destinations and the nights spent there. gWA3L
The bar chart illustrates the Australia's most popular locations, while the second one shows the locations that visitors spend most in 2019. In general, it can be seen that both domestic and international visitors visit Sydney most, however, Canberra was the place that people stay the most at night. According to the first chart, Sydney and Melbourne were the cities people visit the most. There were more domestic visitors in New Coast NSW than Perth and Gold Coast, also. In contrast, international visitors travelled to Gold Coast more than travel to North Coast NSW. As it seen from the other chart, about 22 nights was the average number of visitors who have visited and stayed in Canberra and Melbourne. On the contrary, in Tropical North Queensland, Gold Coast and North Coast NSW visitors only stayed for an average of 8-11 nights. Although Sydney was visited the most, travellers only stayed there for 20 nights. Overall, Sydney and Melbourne were the cities people visited and stayed most in 2019.
The bar chart illustrates the Australia's most popular locations, while the second one
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shows
the locations that
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visitors
spend most in 2019.
In general
, it can be
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seen
that both domestic and international
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visitors
visit Sydney most,
however
, Canberra was the place that
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people
stay the most at
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night
. According to the
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people
visit the most. There were more domestic
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visitors
in New
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Coast
NSW than Perth and Gold
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Coast
,
also
.
In contrast
, international
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visitors
travelled to Gold
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Coast
more than travel to North
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Coast
NSW. As it
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seen
from the other chart, about 22
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nights
was the average number of
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visitors
who have visited and
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stayed
in Canberra and Melbourne.
On the contrary
, in Tropical North Queensland, Gold
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Coast
and North
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Coast
NSW
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visitors
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only
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stayed
for an average of 8-11
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nights
. Although Sydney
was visited
the most,
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travellers
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only
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stayed
there for 20
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nights
.
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, Sydney and Melbourne were the cities
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people
visited and
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stayed
most in 2019.
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IELTS academic The bar charts below give information on traveling to different Australian destinations and the nights spent there.

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