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ielts writing task1 two different charts

ielts writing task1 two different charts 2RKw6

The bar chart compares the number of males and females attending four different evening cources in 2009, and the pie chart illustrates the ages profile of these cource attendees. It is clear that significantly more women than men attended in a drama, painting and language cources at the tuition centre. We can also see that evening cources were much popular among older adults. According to the bar chart, drama, painting and language corces attracted mpre women than men in 2009, with 40 females and 20males. Another type of evening cource is a painting, which was a popular choice among both gendres, with 25 males and 30females. Men more attended cource of sculpture mere 10. Looking at the age profile pie chart, the majority of people was old than 40. To be precise, 42% between 50 and over, 26% between 40 and 49. Young adults were in the minority, with 11% between 20 and 29, 5% aged under 20.

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