Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The graph gives information about how commutes travelled to work in one city in New Zeland. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about how commutes travelled to work in one city in New Zeland. lLXNW
The graph gives information about how commutes travelled to work in one city in New Zeland making a comparison between the use of specific transport in 1996 and in 2006. From the graph is evident the major form of transport utilized by the employed people is the use of private cars and trucks; however, the use of these vehicles decreased from the 50% to the 38% in 10 years. The second most used form of transport is the company vehicle. In the 1996 the number of employed who used was around the 10%, and in 2006 the percentage reached the 15%. Other forms of transport that increased their use from 1996 and 2006 are the public transport and the use of bicycles which both reached almost the 10% of users. For Summarise, despite the dramatic drop, the most used form of transport in 2006 remained the use of private vehicle, however the use of company vehicle or public buses have grown a lot.
The graph gives information about how commutes travelled to work in one city in New
Possible spelling mistake found.
Zeland
making a comparison between the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of specific
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
in 1996 and in 2006.

From the graph is evident the major
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
form
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
utilized by the employed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
is
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of private cars and trucks;
however
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vehicles
decreased from the 50% to the 38% in 10 years.

The second most
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
form
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vehicle
. In the 1996 the number of employed who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
was around the 10%, and in 2006 the percentage reached the 15%.

Other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
forms
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
that increased their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
Nonstandard phrase. Did you mean: "from 1996 to 2006"?
from 1996 and 2006
are the public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of bicycles which both reached almost the 10% of users.

For
Possible spelling mistake. 'Summarise' is British English.
Summarise
, despite the dramatic drop, the most
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
form
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
in 2006 remained the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of private
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vehicle
,
however
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vehicle
or public buses have grown a lot.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The graph gives information about how commutes travelled to work in one city in New Zeland.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
163 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6band
    Ownership of computer by students
    The graphs provide information about the computer ownership and by level of education rate of the population from 2002 to 2010. Overall, the computer ownership graph illustrates upward trend throughout this years. Whereas, the computer ownership by education level graph depicts upward trend too. Mo...
  • 6.5band
    propotion and population aged 65 years and over
    Over one hundred years, the population with over 65 in the USA, Sweden, and Japan has some future changes, and the line graph reveals the percentage for each country. Generally, Japan's highest projection is in 2040, while its lowest is between 1960 to approximately 1990. While the United States' l...
  • 5band
    The changes in then place of queen mary hospital in the year's 1960, 1980, 2000
    The diagrams illustrate a variety of alterations of the place at queen mary hospital in 1980 and 2000 since it was built in 1960. Looking from an overall perspective, it is conspicuous that there were a spectacular developments over the time period. As can be seen when it was constructed there was...
  • 6.5band
    the figure shows the results of a survey of 1000 adolescents in five different countries
    The chart portrays an overview aftereffect of 1000 young people about at what age they ought to follow specific privileges and obligations. The overview has been led in five unique identities on three classifications like marriage, casting a ballot, and criminal obligation. The overview result show...
  • 5.5band
    ielts writing task 1 flow-chart
    The first flow diagram illustrates the process of glass container production, and the second diagram shows steps in the process of recycling used glass. ! ! We can see that glass is made using three main raw materials, and that the manufacturing process consists of four distinct stages. It requires...
  • 6band
    THE TABLE BELOW SHOW THE FIGURES IN THOUSANDS FOR IMPIROSNMENTS IN FIVE COUBTRIES BETWEEN 1930 AND 1980.
    THE BAR CHART ILLUSTRATES THE NUMBER OF PRISONER IN FIVE NATIONS (GREAT BIRTIAN, AUSTRALIA, NEW ZEALAND, USA AND CANADA) FROM 1930 TO 1980. THE UNITS ARE MEASURED IN THOUSANDS. OVERALL, THE DIGIT OF CRIMINALS IN USA AND CANADA IS THE HIGHEST WHEREAS, THE LAW BREAKERS OF GREAT BRITAIN IS THE LOWEST....





Get more results for topic:
  • The graph gives information about how commutes travelled to work in one city in New Zeland. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.