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The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.

The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. P2PB
The given two pie charts illustrate the proportion of various industry streams which contributed towards Turkey economy in 2000 and 2016. Overall, in both the years, at the starting year Agriculture sector contributed a significant percentage in the economy of turkey while Construction has the least amount of proportion. In comparison, Health and Education has the greatest percentage whereas Finance, Business and other has lowest ration in the final year. In terms of construction, it accounted for only 3% in 2000 which significantly rose to 10% in 2016. Next, Trade Utilities and Transportation comprises of 14% in the first year and it just increased to merely of almost 2% in the final year. Finance, Business and other consists of 5% and 8% respectively in 2000 and 2016. Likewise, Manufacturing increased by 4% in 2016 which resulted to 12%. On the other hand, Agriculture contributed of almost a quater in turkey economy in starting period and it dramtically dropped by 10% which accounted for 14% in 2016. Both, Government and Leisure and Hospitality rose by 3% which comprises of 9% and 14% respectively. In contrast, Healthcare and Education remains unchanged over the 16 years period and maintained exactly around a fifth (17%) to the economy of Turkey in two mentioned years.
The
given
two pie charts illustrate the proportion of various industry streams which contributed towards Turkey
economy
in 2000 and 2016.

Overall
, in both the years, at the starting
year
Agriculture sector contributed a significant percentage in the
economy
of
turkey
while Construction has the least amount of proportion.
In comparison
, Health and Education has the greatest percentage whereas Finance, Business and other has
lowest
ration in the final year.

In terms of construction, it accounted for
only
3% in 2000 which
significantly
rose to 10% in 2016.
Next
, Trade Utilities and Transportation
comprises of
14% in the
first
year
and it
just
increased to
merely
of almost 2% in the final
year
. Finance, Business and other consists of 5% and 8%
respectively
in 2000 and 2016.
Likewise
, Manufacturing increased by 4% in 2016 which resulted to 12%.

On the other hand
, Agriculture contributed of almost a
quater
in
turkey
economy
in starting period and it
dramtically
dropped by 10% which accounted for 14% in 2016. Both,
Government
and Leisure and Hospitality rose by 3% which
comprises of
9% and 14%
respectively
.
In contrast
, Healthcare and Education remains unchanged over the 16 years period and maintained exactly around a fifth (17%) to the
economy
of Turkey in two mentioned years.
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IELTS academic The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.

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